Sunday 15 August 2010

Sunday Scribblings: View

On a glorious day at Corfe Castle
We set out to the hills for a hike
When through all of the touristic bustle
Came a butterfly riding a bike

(In the works of mythologic masters
Think of Titian or Watts or Van Dyke
Is there such a surreal disaster
As a butterfly riding a bike?)

So we walked with all Purbeck before us
To the cliffs where the waves pound and strike
And the breakers themselves beat a chorus
Of a butterfly riding a bike

Now in Dorset pubs often they mutter
Of the legend all swear by alike
Maybe one day you too will hear flutters
Of that butterfly riding her bike

6 comments:

  1. A butterfly riding her bike?
    Magical. Sweet.

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  2. I love this! It is just so whimsical and surreal, and yet strangely...grounded. I would love to see a butterfly on a bike. Plus the singsong sound of it makes it like a fairytale.

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  3. The cadence makes me want to twirl to your words. It is a lovely lilting piece. The surreal stands great juxtaposition to the rhythm. Bravo!
    ~Brenda

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  4. Why not? Whether it be Dorset or a myriad other places nature is busy doing its thing. A butterfly and a bike today a wasp on a Vespa tomorrow.

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  5. butterfly riding a bike... sweet :)

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  6. Butterflies are my favorite things! If I ever see one riding a bike I will probably follow and never be heard from again :)
    Thanks for this wonderful poem!

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